Self editing

    This brings up another topic which is how one writes and speaks, or where the writing voice comes from, or if one could figure out to what degree of bad writing, one were given to a written voice, or that if you were suddenly attempting a scholarly approach, and then found one's writing picked apart by the critical voice which were asking the persistent 'what does this mean?'

   Hmmm, I was trying to figure if and when knowing when repetitions of patterns should lead to these sorts of flow awkward sentences.  If for instance, mid stream in sentence, I get up to grab a beverage, and then worked sentence completions later, or resuming on a number of paused moments, or merely that the magic of thoughts were like this.  Then if you knew better or not so well, if you were an amateur such as one self, it were on the obvious point of not professionally selling, or constructed in a way to be abundantly clear, or that the lack of clarity in one's convention weren't stylistically well enough for the 'cool' crowd.

I am honestly looking for the free ride to Honolulu these days, I've felt that I've earned it...wheel well of the jet calling?!  The good news is that the partial cryogenic freeze on the way over, likely earns one a few hours of savings on the aging bit.  Sorry rusty on humor I suspect...I need feedback...